Another small story. Same as "the dream" [link]
the same people, just a different moment in time. All pieces that I will write will be able to stand on their own.
I'm curious what people think of this writing style though, because it isn't easy for me to write like that, but somehow it works better like this. that's why I'd like to know what you like and don't like in this story. (including the writing style). And just general feedback so I can improve my writing.